Hey all, thanks for the help with my story. I've been going through and fixing the tenses. Geez, I'm amazed you people were able to read it at all! I'm adding a bit of backstory sooner in the story to make Morgan and Edward's relationship make more sense, and be a bit stronger. I'm taking out some small sections, and trying to get rid of those horrid chiche's (but really, how else do you describe that fluttery feeling in the belly?)
I'd really like suggestions on a title if you guys have any ideas. I was never happy with what I chose. Help?
And now a word from Professor Obvious...
Flannery says:
"[T]here's a certain grain of stupidity that the writer of fiction can hardly do without, and this is the quality of having to stare, of not getting the point at once. The longer you look at one object, the more of the world you see in it..."
2 comments:
Haha, I know exactly what you mean about that fluttery feeling! My feeble attempt ended in migrating Snow Geese! In a belly? Snow Geese?
"She felt the all-too-familiar feeling of an ocean sloshing itself against her insides." I know what you're talking about! Butterflies explain the feeling so well. All other attempts just seem ridiculous.
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