6.19.2007

Conflict Finally!

I wrote for a half hour this morning. Mr. Bennet doesn't die anymore and I found what the conflict would be. The secret was the dog. It sounds kind of lame just to tell it but just as she's about to leave she discovers that her beloved dog is missing. It still needs a lot of work. As I write this, I'm still questioning if that's the right conflict but the dog was everything to her. I like my story but it's frustrating this morning.

1 comment:

Rachel Yoder said...

Pam, this conflict sounds great, exactly the stuff of short fiction.