I know technically I'm like 26 or so minutes late posting this, sorry. Anyway, I'm having trouble figuring out where to stick the narrator in the story. I thought it would make it more immediate if the whole story was told though dialogue between all the different characters as seen by a neutral observer that the characters don't see. Kind of like a ghost evesdropping or something. Because of that it 's a little awkward right now, but I hope to polish it up a lot by Monday afternoon. Until next time.

Brian Kimball