The Revamp

This morning I reread my story for the first time. I added more to the scene where Mrs. Bennet searches for the dog, because that's pivotal for her. It wasn't enough just to summarize it. She's completely desperate. Rock bottom. And I just glanced over it too much. Now it is better. I also rewrote the dialogue in the confrontation between her and Ted when she's finally leaving. The dialogue between Brian and his girlfriend was great to hear.
Mrs. Bennet has to leave but I still don't know what is in the suitcase.